“I hereby sentence the Rough House to death. Hope you didn’t have any dreams wrapped up in it.”
When it came time to go to press, I decided that the “tabloid” cover I’d originally designed for issue three just wasn’t engaging enough, so this is the new version, thanks to a suggestion from long-time Suburban Jungle influencer, HantaMouse. The tabloid design will go on the back cover, instead.
I love this exercise, but it takes forever. If interested, you can find the template here: 25 Essential Expressions
I am still not quite happy with the designs for either Charity or Langley. I was hoping that it would smooth out as the story progressed, but if anything it’s getting worse instead of better, so I’m trying to work it out and “get it right” before going on with another issue.
Charity should be young, almost baby-faced, bright eyed, eager, and cheerful. Think Sailor Moon with spots. So, eyes bigger, muzzle smaller, lots of big expressions are the mode for her.
Suggestions? Comments? I’m all ears!